In the past

In the past

A Poem by Lovelysongs

In the past,

I wasn't able to sit alone,

with out thinking of you,

In the past,

I could only talk about you,

In the present,

I can sit alone,

and think about anything,

but you,

In thr present,

I can talk about anything,

but you,

I've changed,

and,

you can't seem to see,

your blinded by my light,

the light i shared with you,

you say your over me,

but in reality,

your not,

Your blinded by the past we shared,

but,

that was,

In the past

© 2010 Lovelysongs


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Wow touching. It felt like you were telling people to stop looking in the past and lookat the prestent.Nice.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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good on you! Well said, liked it alot

Posted 13 Years Ago


very good! I can relate to this completely!

-Maddie

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is wonderful, well done!

Posted 13 Years Ago


good contrasting lines..
good work..

Posted 13 Years Ago


i really enjoy this poem it sybolises your passion for writing and your past love

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Lovelysongs
Lovelysongs

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Hello there, my Name is Paige. I am 13, and i am in 8th grade. I am a loving, carefree person who enjoys to write about my feelings about others. I like to write anything. I enjoy art. more..

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