If you really knew me,

If you really knew me,

A Poem by Lovelysongs

If you really knew me,
you would know my life,
isn't a lollipop,
Its a whole lot of dark chocolate,
If you really knew me,
you would know that,
I'm not a mean person,
I'm uncomfortable with my real self,
If only you really knew me,
you would understand,
how hard my life really is,

© 2010 Lovelysongs


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This poem is amazing, it really speaks, and has strong emotion.
I love how you compared your life to candy, it was very unique.
Fantastic poem(:

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Hello there, my Name is Paige. I am 13, and i am in 8th grade. I am a loving, carefree person who enjoys to write about my feelings about others. I like to write anything. I enjoy art. more..

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