Crimson Carnage

The Crimson carnage burned with death 

Forever bright the was no rest

for beast of the black to take from your chest

a perfect heart full of song 

and crush it in his darkened palm

from the depths of the sea

this beast has come to corrupt me

it will rip away from me

every single thing I see

the thing is the darkest under the sun

there is no stopping the Kraken for it has begun.

Reviews

[MyOpenThirdEye]

The imagery is pretty brutal, so metal ha

Short and to the point though, I like it.

[Loven Epic]

Yeah I decided to write about Crimson, and the I matched it with carnage, and then I found out that Carnage pretty much means massacre so Thats what I wrote...