tears

draining my eyes
into buckets
melting my pretty face
into pillows
clinging my soft hands
into fist
gazing desperately
at ceilings

Reviews

[Vatsayayana]

Ooohhhh....
This just pulls at my heart springs!
Stunning, simple, gorgeous!
Beautifully penned.
You've brought a sad, soft smile to my face.
I really love how thought provoking your writing is.
It really does call to me and I cannot help but "feel".
Stunning my dear, stunning.

[forfila]

The title says it all "Tears"
A very descriptive, short poem about a girl going through the motions of pain.

Well written, well enjoyed. =)

[forfila]

Short sharp and heartfelt,,,hope you are ok

=)

Love from me.