Rannato

my funny poem

Rannato at the grotto Stole a pipe from Divo Stuck it down his pants The women went into a trace The men chased him thus Poor Rannato! Rannato at the fair Everyone stared He had fell down Into the lions dust The lion chased him thus Poor Rannato! Rannato at work, being a jerk Had to much fun, with the aupair With a lot of cuss The owner chased him thus Poor Rannato! Rannato at home, The day was looking dim Rannato had always been He went to his mamma He spat in her pastrami Mamma chased him thus Mamma was very fast, faster than the men faster than the lion faster than the owner She caught him thus So Rannato cried as she tore his side Thus, thus Poor Rannato!

Reviews

[mauimantaco]

Thank you for reviewing one of mine;

this was great;

It was fast-paced, fun and amusing.

I feel as if it is sort of cartoony.

I laughed out loud at the end.

"Poor Rannato!"
Structured brilliantly and made it flow for my eyes.

Overall, I enjoyed it very much; probably as much as you enjoyed writing it!

Cheers.

[Vatsayayana]

Gorgeous!
You had me chuckling from start to finish. I loved this.
I'd love to know where you get some of your ideas.
Wonderful!

[J]

Ha, funny stuff... I found this amusing to read. Quite the imaginative little yarn you have here...
=)