My, my, my, me, me, me

My, my, my, me, me, me

A Poem by LovingJoy

You keep stamping on my feet,

my love,

claiming it's my fault and blaming me,

my love,

you make a mess of what was neat,

my love,

so you can gripe about how it used to be,

my love,

when you get caught bang to rights,

my love,

you cry crocodile tears for effect,

my love,

if you're not excited you cause a fight,

my love,

you need some-one get it in the neck,

my love,

you act like a toxic brat at a birthday,

my love,

who didn't get the pass the parcel toy,

my love,

no matter how stupid, you have to have the last say,

my love,

unhappy tension is all you are able to enjoy,

my, my, my love.

My love is a prop, a crutch for your weakness,

your love a tragi-comedy you cannot even see,

all the battles you lost brandishing bitter sweetness,

fizzing away inside, find no quarter only poisoned sanctuary.

Watch you break apart on your own quartering,

Every day your shrapnel cuts some-one to the bone,

Your finest art is that of graceless self-waterboarding,

However will you cope when you end up alone...

© 2013 LovingJoy


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"My love is a prop, a crutch for your weakness,

your love a tragi-comedy you cannot even see,

all the battles you lost brandishing bitter sweetness,

fizzing away inside, find no quarter only poisoned sanctuary."

Some people are so selfish and self-absorbed. They don't like to give or share and they are afraid of losing things...A splendid read and write...:)........

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LovingJoy

7 Years Ago

Many thanks for the read, your wise comprehension of the ideas, and the positive comment.
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

Wow. Good to know...You are welcome...:).................



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"My love is a prop, a crutch for your weakness,

your love a tragi-comedy you cannot even see,

all the battles you lost brandishing bitter sweetness,

fizzing away inside, find no quarter only poisoned sanctuary."

Some people are so selfish and self-absorbed. They don't like to give or share and they are afraid of losing things...A splendid read and write...:)........

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LovingJoy

7 Years Ago

Many thanks for the read, your wise comprehension of the ideas, and the positive comment.
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

Wow. Good to know...You are welcome...:).................
People take each other for granted.Sometimes forgetting that there are other people's feelings to consider and everything cannot be "me,me,me,".It takes two to make a relation ship work not one person belittleing the other to make themselves feel good.This is a lovely as usual write and most intuitive:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LovingJoy

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind and intelligent words, they are valued coming from a poet like yourself.
Vidya Bacchus

7 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend:)

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