Red Heavy Eyelids

Lay your head down next to me

Breathe in my smoke ‘cause it’s full of green

Let’s float up to the stars

Way up next to Mars.

Wrap your fingertips,

Around the surface,

And hang on for dear life.

 

 

Let me become your wings

Let me take you with me

We won’t even leave the grass

Surrounded by empty cans

But we’re happy.

 

Red heavy eyelids,

Slightly blue soft lips

As the temperature hits

I suppose I could warm them up

With a little kiss.

 

 

Can you see it in my eyes?

It’s a love that’s so blind

For the very first time

I feel so alive

What you’re doing to me?

Filling me with relief

I couldn't care

What anybody else say's.

 

 

Let me become your wings

Let me take you with me

We won’t even leave the grass

Surrounded by empty cans

But we’re happy.

 

Red heavy eyelids,

Slightly blue soft lips

As the temperature hits

I suppose I could warm them up

With a little kiss.

 

 

I love how relaxed you are

How you sit on the bonnet of my car

How you don’t wear make up

How you don’t care if your hair is down or up

I love you

 

 

Red heavy eyelids,

Slightly blue soft lips

As the temperature hits

I suppose I could warm them up

With a little kiss.

Reviews

[Morrigan Nicole]

OH!!! How sweet, this is a very cute piece!

"Red heavy eyelids,

Slightly blue soft lips

As the temperature hits

I suppose I could warm them up

With a little kiss."

I love it!!!! Definately adding to Faves!

infinity/100..... too bad i cannot go that high, but seriously, i really like it!

[AK]

Awesome! Has the makings of a great song.... The red heavy eyelids and soft blue lips made quite an impression....

[Egoless]

I love this! "red heavy eyelids/slightly blue soft lips" Amazing imagery!!!

[Lowesy]

tis a song Marie, most of the crap I write are songs :D I have to say, I quite like this one, I actually find myself singing it in work

[Marie]

this sounds like a song, with the chorus "Red heavy eyelids..."

[Katie Marie]

I agree that this would be a perfect song :) Such a smooth flow of words.
Beautiful.

-Katie Marie

[Mockingbird]

shows how much you two are in love that you don't need to any place special; all you need are each other laying on the grass among empty cans. shows that you can go to mars just by sharing and spending this moment together. nice piece.

[Olive Belikov]

love this so much :) haha i think im gonna add it to my library. its so sweet and good, would make the most perfect song

[jkhatz]

Vividly reproduced an evening I had spent on my back, in good company, staring up at the stars from a blanket placed over desert sand. The green burned and the beer flowed. Thank you for taking me for a ride in the way-back machine.

[Sarah Redigan]

truly amazing .. i love the repetitiveness it really puts you there watching it all happen