Rescue

Typical heart break, me getting played over and over.

From that time I met you, it was a Saturday night

I had a little preview, of our highlights

We began talking and talking turned to kissing

Thinking what the hell have we both been missing?

 

I had your chat up lines calling 2 weeks later

But I planned on ignoring you, didn’t know how to

When you got me thinking you’re not a heartbreaker

 

After all this time

You still got me thinking about you

Cannot think of what else to do

When will my hopes and dreams come to my rescue?

 

We been talking for a while through technology

Flirting and hinting daily

You had me thinking you’re truly amazing

 

After all our in-depth conversations

I thought the “the one” train pulled into my station

But the days after we were with each other all weekend

You told me you were head over heels with your new girlfriend

 

And after all this time

You still got me thinking about you

Cannot think of what else to do

When we will your hopes and dreams come to my rescue?

 

When you were back to being single

Me and you and were back to being me and you

You still had my body tremble and my tingle

 

You tell me to enjoy my youth and to have fun

So I did just that and found someone

But you had a go at me implied we’re done

 

And still after all this time

You still got me thinking about you

Cannot think of what else to do

When will our hopes and dreams come to my rescue?

 

  

Author's Note

Any of this relate to your situations?

Reviews

[Loz]

Thanks :) Yeah I'm not all that good at typing the lyrics, i had just written it so i didn't proof read, oops.

You're right, life's a twat at times like these.
I don't know how to use this thing. It's a song so I didn't think it would come under poem.
Chat up lines as in him chatting me up.

[Matthewtuckey]

'Had your chat-up lines'- who was calling who here? Do you mean calling on the phone?

'when we will'- typo?

'my tingle'- do you need 'my' here?

I relate to it, still having dreams about someone I met 18 months ago. Life's a twat sometimes. Anyway. There's the odd metaphor in there, but I remember being taught various techniques for poetry you could use- alliteration, onomatopoeia etc. - If you know them, don't be afraid of using them. If you don't, google them.

Why did you put this under screenplay? This is a poem.