6 Feet Under

6 Feet Under

A Screenplay by Loz
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A boy who's got me down all the time

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It’s a new day, the nights are old
I’ve gained access; to what I’m gonna say
To you, I have put into words
How I’m feeling, about our relationship
That I am dealing with
The relationship we shared
Gave me the impression that you cared
Say you want no more than a fling
But when we’re out together we’re a thing
 
And I toss and turn I can’t sleep at night
You got me worried and I aint doing things right
You drop a bombshell that you got somebody else
And you’ve got me 6 feet under
 
I can’t stress, how important my feelings are to me
But you carry on using them against me
What do I see? I see a boy using his honesty
To an advantage to see the way that I feel
So go tell everybody else
I’m just another girl
Except I’m the one who wants more
Even though I’m only young, I’m quite high strung
On the one who cuts me to the core
 
And I toss and turn I can’t sleep at night
You got me worried and I aint doing things right
You drop a bombshell that you got somebody else
And you’ve got me 6 feet under
 
You don’t care, about all the other girls out there
But there’s me, you don’t love but you care about me
Do I dare? Ask what do you want from me?
I’m too scared, of the reply you call an answer
It’s another word of advice hypocrisy
You hold my hand, hold it tight like you mean it
Don’t understand, why we can’t be together
Now I didn’t say forever
So please don’t run away to try and forget about me
 
What’s going on? Come on girl it’s time to be strong
He’s with another girl I find it wrong
To say you want nothing, but it don’t look like nothing with her to me
 
And you toss and turn you can’t sleep at night
I got you worried and you aint doing things right
 

I drop a bombshell, that I have somebody else
And I got you 6 feet under 

© 2009 Loz


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Love This Loz - Fairplay (:

Posted 12 Years Ago


YES!!
You didn't have to ask either, I loved it.
from the beginning I was hooked and your words traveled with my eyes futher and futher, I enjoyed every moment :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Hey I'm Lauren, nicknamed Loz because that's what my friends have been calling me for years. I'm 16, staying on in school. Love my friends and family. Haven't got time for boys anymore, that's where t.. more..

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