My Love

I suffocate around you

Basking in your light

You seem to be as if an angel

That was sent just for me

And only me

It was as if God is telling me something

But I already know what it is

You mean everything to me

You have no idea

How happy you make me

And how alive I feel when I talk to you

Sing into my ear

As I drift asleep in your arms

I feel as if I weigh nothing

Like paper drifting into the day air

I'll wait for you for all eternity if I have to

You whisper in my ear

As if an angel was behind me

Telling me the secrets of the universe

But I forget that your not an angel

But something better; my man

And you whisper you love me

 I was blind folded by the world

Til' you came along and changed that

I only thought about my death

And how to plan it

But you opened my eyes to another world

Where life wasn't bad at all

But it was wonderful

I cannot repay you for the happiness you have given me

And love that you have shown me

I love you with all of my heart and soul

 

 

 

My Love!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

What wonderful deep feelings this was written..such tender words
I suffocate around you,basking in your light,my angel sent just for me
How happy you make me,how I feel so alive,you sing into my ears
as I drift into sleep,how it feels so light,I wait for eternity for you
I was blind to the world till you came and changed it all
You opened my eyes to heavens never seen before
where life was just so wonderful,how can I repay you
for all the happiness and love..I love you heart and soul
what lovely write..

[x]

intrigueing very lucky guy

[17thWhitePrince]

WOW !!! WOW !!! WOW !!!
Again I must say WOW !!!
such beautiful lines of poetry !!!
you have such a wonderful way with words !!!
WOW !!!
What a sentiment !!!
What feelings !!!
I loved the lines where you said ...

"As I drift asleep in your arms

I feel as if I weigh nothing

Like paper drifting into the day air"

WOW !!! This is definatly going in my favorites !!!

[Christopher Joyce]

Pure tripe.

[Orlando Murcia]

I love how you expressed yourself in this poem.
You must really love him a lot,
I kmow because I am in love to , and I write
nothing but love poems about her on most of my writes

Great job!
Keep up the great work
I enjoyed this piece

Orlando Murcia

[Gema]

aww cute i love this fresh new love!
Powerful,protective and cute!
Very sweet love the way it's written
Well donw x