Whispering Wind

Whispering Wind

A Poem by Panda
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I like the way it all ends with a "e" sound lol.

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The midnight wind whispers faintly to me,

As I lay lucidly beneath the trees.

The melodic voices upon the breeze,

Shroud me with their chanting tease.

Sweet murmurs lash my ears as I listen intently.

And as I gaze up at the glistening sky,

The stars cry out silently.

They speak to me tenderly,

Of secrets from natures belly.

 

© 2009 Panda


Author's Note

Panda
What do you think about the flow and the constant "e" sound? Is it annoying, or does it flow nicely?

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Added on September 14, 2009
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