Silence

Silence

A Poem by Lucy
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Short poem

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Take a deep breath of
cold air hits your face.
You smile for
no one is there.
Solitude, silence
Shiver, sigh
And you alone
And you your mind

© 2011 Lucy


Author's Note

Lucy
Some words form part of 2 sentences at once on purpose.

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I like this! It says so much with hardly any words. The message is clear yet there is an endless possibility of what it could be. Good Job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


There's something captivating about silence. It's so rare and under-appreciated to have complete and total silence. Sometimes we don't know how to handle something precious like that.

Posted 12 Years Ago


interesting! had to read this twice after seeing your note >.<

never read anything like it before. clever and creative and you get the feel for the piece across very well.

nicely done indeed :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 28, 2011
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Lucy
Lucy

London, London, United Kingdom



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