My Pet Werewolf Is Crazy!

My Pet Werewolf Is Crazy!

A Poem by V. Lucien Maier
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A rambling I did when I was writing My werewolf Book (Of The Wolf "Zion")

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© 2009 V. Lucien Maier


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Nice way to have your readers listen to your poems and stories so that they will be translated in just the way you intended them to be. Although it would be nice to have an alternative for those, such as myself who prefers to read instead of listening.

The werewolf poem was nice, the placed sfx made it more thrilling than mere text would be, I admit. I think that maybe this poem would be a nice beginning to a longer story about a delusional man, or something. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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LOL! That was so cute. Do you do a lot of T.V. ads. You sound perfect for that job. I love your voice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

unfortunately I am deaf so I must rely on the written wordPerhaps you could publish both audio and text

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It was a very original piece. I liked the bit about vampires, that was nice, and might make a good follow up poem to this one. I realized after listening that we don't get many poems about werewolves, so thanks for that. Very well done.

-Richard.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Lol, I liked this :) "At least vampires will listen to me," hahaha.

Good poem :)


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was very interesting. I will tell you that you are a talented story teller! This made me chuckle. Especially as the one time manager of a pet store. You tied in music and effects that added to the experience. This was a fun and fresh approach to werewolves. This might be fun to have in my ipod!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thanks for the "Listen Request", Lucien!
While vamps and werewolves are not my thing, and I tend to avoid those for whom it is, still I can identify with the out-of-control mental interloper who has been charging around in my head for who knows how long, until being finally allowed his escape via the pen (keyboard). In my case there can be no doubt that he/it has damaged his/its former host, but I leave it to the reader to determine whether the result merited the havoc! 'Course, he might be unruly, BECAUSE you refuse him the intimacy of the couch, and a long-overdue ear-scratch...had you considered that?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dude, I listened to the whole thing. I wonder if it did any damage. lol. I enjoyed it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This was an amusing 'ramble'-poem about the werewolves (and how the vampires listened much better), but again I must admit I found the audio hard to connect with, and thus a lot of the poem felt flimsy. I realize this was more of a stream of thought than an actual 'poem', but the random "GET OFF THE FRICKIN COUCH!--oh, hi, so here's the thing" felt a bit ridiculous.
The idea of the werewolf escaping through the pen was interesting, but the sound effects of a physical creature were distracting.
I liked the brevity and humor in the words, but I really wish I could have *seen* this poem, as I think I would have been able to appreciate more of the humor. Sometimes the narrator voice faded away (as if he had stepped back from the microphone) and so I could not hear some of the lines.
Your audio projects are very interesting. I don't think they are much my cup of tea, but I am curious to see how they develop as you develop your narration and writing style.

~Katherine

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is funny iliked this
And yes walk your warefolfe more often.
Enjoyable

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Nice way to have your readers listen to your poems and stories so that they will be translated in just the way you intended them to be. Although it would be nice to have an alternative for those, such as myself who prefers to read instead of listening.

The werewolf poem was nice, the placed sfx made it more thrilling than mere text would be, I admit. I think that maybe this poem would be a nice beginning to a longer story about a delusional man, or something. Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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V. Lucien Maier was born in 1973, in Amersfoort, in the Netherlands. His father a civil engineer had a love of travel, and both parents loved skiing. When the opportunity arose to move to .. more..

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