A Poem by Lucky










        Imagine a life where no one dies

Imagine a life where no one cries


But we all imagine for change

For all of the range


When a relative dies

We imagine there alive


We all do imagine but its fun

Don't imagine about a gun


Because its sad 

It could also make you mad



Because it has happened to almost all

we have experienceed tragedy fall

© 2009 Lucky

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Your words are true.
"Because it has happened to almost all
we have experienceed tragedy fall"
I have lived a long time. Learn love and loss of family and friend. We can't escape the sadness. Old age teaches us. To appreciate good friend and have family near. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.

Posted 5 Years Ago

Wonderful , sweet and simple

Posted 7 Years Ago

wonderfully written

Posted 8 Years Ago

A great philosophy in a few words

Posted 9 Years Ago

positive and persuasive message, penned in a very convincing fashion. nicely expressed and cleverly written

Posted 9 Years Ago

Good. Ilike it. Yea don't imagine a gun.

Posted 9 Years Ago

oh so sad

Posted 9 Years Ago

Very nicely done...! Violance is not the answer!

Posted 9 Years Ago

It is incredibly beautiful What philosophy in a few poetic lines!

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on November 16, 2009



Madison, ME

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