Imagine

Imagine

A Poem by Lucky

Imagine

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

        Imagine a life where no one dies

Imagine a life where no one cries

 

But we all imagine for change

For all of the range

 

When a relative dies

We imagine there alive

 

We all do imagine but its fun

Don't imagine about a gun

 

Because its sad 

It could also make you mad

 

 

Because it has happened to almost all

we have experienceed tragedy fall


© 2009 Lucky


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This could be a good rap. I like it. Keep going....

Posted 12 Years Ago


Imagine nice things....feel good :))

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lucky
You imagine good, only a small advice please expand it a bit. It ended too early that is not sufficiant to take any person with the emotions.

Hope to see that in new write
Appericiation

Regards
PRODICAL

Posted 12 Years Ago


"When a relative dies

We imagine there alive" it's they're. :)

this is a sad poem that makes me smile.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Its really sad kind of I wish that. You could right one like that but make it more cheerful.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is good.. Fix the format like in the middle

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 16, 2009

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Lucky
Lucky

Madison, ME



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