"Nothing"

"Nothing"

A Poem by melancholia skies
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T______T Awwie.

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"Nothing"

 

"Beyond the fate,

Before the hate.

Above the taint,

Below the saint...

The wind blows soft,

But in my heart,

Things stirr...

Un-easy,

When I try to remember, all I see is a blurr.

My knees go weak,

I feel weasy.

My emotions leak,

Leak with tears.

Foreshadowing;

Just like mirrors.

What is this feeling?

This life of loneliness,

Condemned to it.

I have something I need to confess,

But I have no one to confess to.

In such distress,

I'm such a mess.

Where are you?

I need you.

I'm nothing, without you.

Love,

Until now, I haven't felt it in years,

And for you, I have so many fears.

And then comes more tears.

In my grave,

I know you are above me.

Crying for the love you gave,

I died.

Then why am I still alive?

Breathing,

In so much pain...

I can feel the wind blow,

I can see the lilies grow.

But I cannot let go,

Let go of this life.

Even though I took it with a knife...

I am not suicidal,

Not at all.

I took my life,

With all my strife,

Because I knew I could not win this fight.

This fight against sacrafice.

And so,

In the night,

I came to your house,

And kissed you as you slept, to be polite.

And then I left,

Without a word,

At least, that nobody heard.

And in the gardens,

My blood was spilt,

For a reason,

Please don't have any guilt.

I died in this season,

Of love, and joy,

For you to keep on living.

But I am no longer sure of what has happened,

I am niether dead, nor living.

Perhaps,

It's because the love I won't stop giving."

 

 

 

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© 2010 melancholia skies


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almost sounds like a rap song! I like reading this though....it stuck with the theme ......

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is very thought provoking. I've been there many a times myself, the emotions in this poem. The imagery with the wind and lilies and the garden, very memorable. Wonderful poem!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great job Andrea.
I really enjoyed the beginning.

"Beyond the fate,
Before the hate.
Above the taint,
Below the saint..."

It seemed to flow endlessly. Great opening to a fabulous poem. It sounded, as you surely were trying to get at; dizzy.


Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

i like this poem, because it changes like i'm reading something dazed. one moment it's this and another it's that, it leaves a mark on the reader. good job on this poem

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Hm. That is a startling poem, and I apologize for not reviewing sooner, I have been busy fixing my computer that crashed, but it's up and running now.
Anyway, nice work, lots of good rhymes in there, keep up the great work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

A very deep and touching piece. I read it that you lost your loev, they died and inside you died as well. To loose someone you love so deeply and strongly has shatter your soul. A wonderful write!


Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

that was amazing
few poems by anyone can captivate me..
and youve done it once again
i feel like this could be a book...
id like to see that happen
beautiful work andrea

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Deep thinking write readable on so many levels. Perhaps you believe as I do that love survives death

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I'll try to upload the music with it, it'll eventually work, the music will fit the mood the poem creates.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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melancholia skies

Bradford, Canada



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