A Poem by luke312

need to feel free


It is not the ability fly that i desire.

It is the need to feel free.

It is the need to feel whole that drives me to be more than i am.

It is my wants and desires that drives me now.

It is the hope to one day obtain that which i lack the most that pushes me forward.

© 2011 luke312

Author's Note

boredom is dangerous

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Might sound crazy, but reminds me of the thoughts of a Wide receiver, hoping to what ever Gods listening, to keep running.

Posted 8 Years Ago

I like this..short,simple and powerful...great write

Posted 11 Years Ago

Another awesome poem. I love how short these are, but yet how powerful they are.
Ah, boredom, I know thee well.

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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3 Reviews
Added on December 11, 2008
Last Updated on February 1, 2011
Tags: free, freedom, wants, desire, truth



Kingston, Jamaica

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