Night Smooth

Ah the dark night
Where I feel nice and alone in the world
While all these lazy sleepers rest

I feel nice and clearheaded
No more screams and squeals of tires
Engines and noises of machines
No random fucked up people shouting
Destroying my focus

It's beautiful
I can't see the details of the dirt
Only smooth curtains of light
Shining through velvet

It energizes me
But not in the manic way that sugar does
It's the rush of pure connection with the stars
Brightly keeping me awake and in a trance
Through me whatever I desire just flows

Reviews

[Prritiy]

nice description of night accompanied by peace.. leaving behind the daily hum drums....

[Luke L]

thank you :)

[Prritiy]

you are welcome.

[Rafia ~ Yellow Girl]

The connection of night with you is beautiful because it's so true and natural. It has peace and serenity and that is making your poem so nice!

[Luke L]

thank you very much, I guess I am a dark person, not negative, but dark I suppose

[Meliss@k]

It's true, I feel like I write best at night when it's quiet and I can actually hear myself think.

[Luke L]

absolutely I plan on moving to a new building soon, because where I live is pretty ghetto and really noisy during the day, it makes me a bit psychotic!