Chick N and Cheese

Chick N and Cheese

A Poem by Luke L

"Yar! I'm gonna have some chick n and cheese, there Sammy!"

Mark Kenny, the frozen
You're an interesting dude
Your drinking problem well
It motivates you to work
Ya you come to work drunk,
Is it a problem then?
If it gets you out of bed?

I'm not trying to be abrasive
You just crack me up, man
Just another lonely character
That I come across, much like myself

You sing your songs badly off-key
I wonder if you hear a nightingale in your own mind
When you drunkenly ramble through
Ain't no sunshine
Or some Carole King song

You used to rent at my friend's house
And you pissed all over your own mattress
Tried to fight your roommate with a frying pan
But in your inebriated stupor
He beat the s**t out of you
The liquor gave you courage
If you were sober you would've remembered
You're an out of shape old man
Who's lived a hard life

You tried to f**k any woman you could
And it obviously alienated you
To your wife, your friends
But I especially can't judge you on that one
I've been there, too
I hope you learned the same as I did

"I think I'm going to go for a smoke there, Luke"

© 2013 Luke L

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I liked how straight forward this poem was. I think it shows what drinking can do to you and how hard it is to get the person you're trying to help to listen.

Posted 6 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Luke L

6 Years Ago

it might I suppose, but it was just meant to be humorous this is a person I work with often at work,.. read more

6 Years Ago

No problem :)
You put it out there, not holding anything back.. You've got much to teach this old drunkard, if he would listen, which he won't. Good descriptions. I love the nightingale reference. Good job!

Posted 6 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Luke L

6 Years Ago

haha I don't know he's a grown man I don't want to teach him I certainly don't like to give unsolici.. read more

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Added on July 16, 2013
Last Updated on July 16, 2013
Tags: humour, nonfiction, biographic, portrait


Luke L
Luke L

Victoria, British Columbia, Canada

I love music. I love writing erotic stories and poems. Follow me on Twitter: @LukeLesterMusic Here is my blog: I write random things on there and link .. more..


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