Exciting To Look At

Exciting To Look At

A Poem by Luke L

Well you're exciting to look at
So I stare
You make my jeans rip
With the rags you wear

When I gaze upon you
It's flesh and hair I'm poised to tear
Just give me the word
But then you open your mouth

And you reveal your ugly insides
I don't want any kisses from wicked witches they give you warts
So I hide

© 2013 Luke L


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This poem speaks a lot with how looks can lure someone and attitude can push them away. Nice write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is almost quirky. It's true that people can hide their ugly motives behind a beautiful exterior. Good job :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Luke L

10 Years Ago

thank you very much :)
Haha I stare, and then I hide...that's pretty much the essence of my interaction with girls...I console myself with the notion that they may be like this if I get too close anyway...nice one :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Haha quite right too young man :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like how original this was. It was very nicely written and I really enjoyed it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Luke L

10 Years Ago

thank you very much :)
Beware the wicked witches
they come from the west and the east
the good witches, I hear
come from the prairies

Tee Hee.

I like your poem:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Luke L

10 Years Ago

that makes sense thank you :)
This was very interesting and different. Good job bud.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

FlatLineBeauty

10 Years Ago

lol, sorry. Good job, Luke :)
Luke L

10 Years Ago

it's all good just giving you crap :p
FlatLineBeauty

10 Years Ago

Lol. I figured.

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Added on September 7, 2013
Last Updated on September 8, 2013
Tags: attraction, repulsion, humour

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Luke L
Luke L

Victoria, British Columbia, Canada



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I love music. I love writing erotic stories and poems. Follow me on Twitter: @LukeLesterMusic Here is my blog: http://luketalkstuff.blogspot.ca/ I write random things on there and link .. more..

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