Humans Are Habits

Humans Are Habits

A Poem by Luke L

Man changing is tough
You're going to feel it
The icy cold painful shivers
When you first jump in the lake
In late spring

But take it take it
Yes go ahead and take a swim
Eventually the water warms up
Eventually the grind becomes
A fulfilling habit

Humans are habits
No more no less
It takes the same thing for failure
For success
The successful rarely become failures
The failures rarely become successful
Habits are hard to change
For better or worse

© 2013 Luke L


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I like this, and the last line "for better or worse" like we are married to the habits because change is so difficult at times to get used to. Really good write, relatable and true to life for some.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Creatures of habit. Thank you for sharing...:)...........

Posted 10 Years Ago


Thoughtful, philosophical yet doesn't hurt the mind. Could read this over and learn about living and self, could read again and feel the person inside that head of yours.

'The successful rarely become failures ~ The failures rarely become successful ~ Habits are hard to change ~ For better or worse' There's so much truth in that or, maybe, there's someone out there who'd like to prove that wrong!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is motivational, straightforward and well written, liked it a lot.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Yes we are creatures of habit...thought provoking piece Luke...Rose

Posted 10 Years Ago


My goodness, isn't that the truth?

Posted 10 Years Ago


Great! I really enjoyed,thanks

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very creative and well expressed. Excellent write. xo

Posted 10 Years Ago


"Eventually the grind becomes
A fulfilling habit" I think that stands for itself...enough said! :) I think that line is one of my favorite new lines...ever.


Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on September 21, 2013
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Tags: human, habit, addiction, success, failure, change

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Luke L
Luke L

Victoria, British Columbia, Canada



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I love music. I love writing erotic stories and poems. Follow me on Twitter: @LukeLesterMusic Here is my blog: http://luketalkstuff.blogspot.ca/ I write random things on there and link .. more..

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