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Beautiful Temptation

Beautiful Temptation

A Poem by Luke L

Ah the beautiful temptation
The blonde hair and that innocent smile
Mara, you really hooked me
When I helped you edit your resume

Then you asked for me to keep you company
And as a smiling child schooling in improv
The only answer was "yes"
So we sat on your bed
While you told me how lonely you were
You keep the TV on for the company

So you stretched out like a cat
I didn't see the glint of evil in your eyes
I only saw your beautiful skin
As I gave you a massage
And it was way more than friendly
But then you told me to go home to bed
Gave me just enough to hook me

The next days you would call me on the phone
Asking me for money
You told me you were bleeding
Monthly
And you needed money for bandaids

I was a sucker of course
Didn't realize most women kept that under control
After the fifth time it was enough
I got hardened to the hurt in your voice
On the other end of the phone
It didn't help when I heard you knocking on doors
Looking for something that wasn't food I'm sure

When you left the building
To move back in with mom and dad
You told me you'd pay me back

Yeah, right
We all know the answer to THAT

Now I wish you'd never asked me for help
I wish that you'd found a sucker
Inside someone else to lick on
But a lesson learned
To not think too much with my heart
To not listen to my dick

© 2014 Luke L


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Silly silly boy, I guess leson was learned indeed.
Guys need to think with the head on there shoulders, not the one in there pants.
This girl was a b***h though, really crewl thing to do, as you where obviously to young to know her bleeding was quite normal haha.
She really played you for a fool in the end huh.
I enjoyed the story. It was different I have never heard a story quite like it.
Keep writing, and remember use the head on your shoulders, and listen with your heart :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Oh.. this is sad. :( Not all women are this way, just so you know. Well written and worded, painting a vivid picture of what has happened and the raw emotions are present as well.

Posted 9 Years Ago


The pain of betrayal.. of being used... it's the hardest pain to overcome because you feel foolish for falling for all the lies... You did a great job of showing the attraction and the detraction in this piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


There is always a risk when one lays themselves vulnerable; and in this case, when it is with the wrong person, people get hurt; but when it is with the right person people get loved. Don't give up on your feelings just be a little more choosy who you let into your heart. Wonderful write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


It's unsettling how well I relate to this...I've been in this scenario enough times for me to blame myself for falling for it as often as I have...you definitely spoke to me here my friend :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


A slice of life piece that reveals our need for connection and for some our need for something to escape from the pain of connection.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I appreciated the sincerity throughout this piece. Thanks so much for sharing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I really appreciate the honest expressed here. Great job. Well penned! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on March 24, 2014
Last Updated on March 25, 2014
Tags: drug, sex, temptation, lust, pity

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Luke L
Luke L

Victoria, British Columbia, Canada



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I love music. I love writing erotic stories and poems. Follow me on Twitter: @LukeLesterMusic Here is my blog: http://luketalkstuff.blogspot.ca/ I write random things on there and link .. more..

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