These Memories

This is just a small sonnet i wrote during a time where memories were haunting me.

 

These memories will never leave me

There are things I can never say

What am I going to be

What did I become that day

With such cruel words I said our undoing

With such a pity thought

We were losing

We had a fight we fought

But the days pass in sadness

Tears always stinging these eyes

Am I only badness

No longer can I say all the byes

These memories are tainted

Now they have fainted

 

Reviews

[Rhianne Ney]

The flow was nice and the feelings were very well expressed and it made my heart feel what you wanted your audience to feel. Just a little note on the question mark, but all in all it's a great piece~!

[Holly Mason]

flows so nicely
words are lovely
thank you for sharing

[Luna Kusan]

That is very sweet
lovely as a birds tweet
I thank you for your comment
Ms Holly

[Daydreamer54]

A very lyrical poem and a wonderful rhyme scheme. Great write! ^^

[Luna Kusan]

Thank you very much. (: