He Said...

He Said...

A Poem by La Luna

Walk gracefully 
Don't shame me 
Stop 
Don't talk without my permission 

Who told you to look 
Lower your gaze 
Walk 
Don't stop without my permission 

I give you life
And I take It 
There's nothing you can do
Your confidence is mine 
Your beauty is mine 
Your soul is mine 
Every part of you is mine 

I told you before you cannot exist without my permission. 

© 2014 La Luna


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Your confidence is mine
Your beauty is mine
Your soul is mine
Every part of you is mine
This is like a spiritual poem...the father of a humans ordered. Actually we need this kind of order now a day. Love the way you create this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

La Luna

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
Saddam

10 Years Ago

you are welcome dear.

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Added on February 3, 2014
Last Updated on February 3, 2014
Tags: Him, Mine, Yours, Dark, Love, battle, sick, life, romance, relationship, sad, pain, abandonment, past, spoken word.

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La Luna
La Luna

London, United Kingdom



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Hi. My name is Luna, I believe in many things, and I find many things beautiful in this world, at first i never cared, but when I started writing I observed every Scene that was around me. One being p.. more..

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