What Driveway?

What Driveway?

A Story by Don Lund
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Flash fiction fun, for the one turn that missed the mark.

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 Bricks and glass rained on the hood of the car. A large plume of dust enveloped the car, while the lighter particles floated higher in the night sky.  The driver carefully pushed away from the steering wheel.  A familiar figure appeared among the dust from the inside of the house, looking angrily into the vehicle through a cracked windshield.  Nervously smiling, the driver quietly replied, “Hi Mom, I’m home!”

© 2008 Don Lund


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giggling! OOPS! this is a great bit of flash fiction. Nicely done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Make sure you find a good drywaller!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Did someone lose their driving privileges? Thanks Don.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Don Lund
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