Nightmare's Begun

This is a poem is based on a character from a story that i'm still working on. I haven't introduced him in it yet, but his name is Ghost. He's from the my story "AshNight: A Vampire's Destiny" (Which i'm still working on BTW. Well Hope you like it ^_^

The Cold and heartless Rain

Is Increasing the Pain

Your Heart is slowing to a steady pace

But i can tell your leaving this place

I only now figured out how to love

And now you must watch me from above

My hatered for him has only grown stronger

Now I hold you Close as i see your eyes begin to close

That's it.

Your Gone.

Looking down on you i finally let the blood fall

"Demons don't Cry"Those words echoed in my head

He took everything rom me and you were my all

How could this have happened?

I promised you it would be alright

Yet, here you are lifeless and cold

"I'm sorry" i say, trying to hodl back crimson tears

But now i guess this the end of all my fears

Now the nightmare has begun

he has unleashed something from within

And i won't give up until it's done.

I promise you here and now, on your body

that he will pay

And now his days are numbered,until his fateful day

Thsi is a promise i intend to keep

And nothing or no one will get in my way

he's in to deep and he doesn't know what he's done

Because like i said "the Nightmare has only begun"

Author's Note

Tell me what you think and please ignore any misspellings or typo's. thanks ^_
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Reviews

[Daydreamer54]

Wow very dark! It flowed nicely andu have a great rhyme scheme! Good Job! :)

[SekkoDollFace]

OOOOO, I rlly like it. =)

[Alice Crypt; Brittany]

It sucked!!!! JUST KIDDING!!!! loved it! ^/_^ -~Sakaya Uchiha~