Apocalypsis Motus

Title means "emotional apocalypse" hope you guys enjoy this, its my first work so probably not great but eh

I can’t hate you,

Even though I tried to.

I can't see you,

It pains me to.

We never talk,

There is nothing left to say.

I cried, I apologized,

Yet you just walked away.

You left me, and the thought of us behind,

I need time, time to clear my mind.

You wasted my time,

Foolishly I believed you were mine.

Regardless of all the signs,

They say love is blind.

In my heart, in my mind.

So look me in my eyes,

And watch as my soul dies,

Screams out in pain.

Feels as if engulfed in flame,

The ashes are all that remain.

Thought you were different,

But just more of the same.

Felt as if real,

Nothing more than a game.

Gave you my love,

You threw it away.

My hearts colored blue,

All skies are gray.

Nothing, left to say,

Will these clouds ever go away?

Or am I damned for all remaining days?

Reviews

[mattavelli]

Hello, Lux, thank you for entering my contest! :)
That's quite a bit of rhyming. Oh relationship, they never seems to end well.

[Rei Cn]

I love how you were able to perfectly convey the emotion from beginning to end. Thank you for submitting this to my contest and congrats for winning the second place for poetry. :) You're a good writer. Keep writing.

[Lux in Tenebris]

Thank you so much! I never thought myself anygood and this was my first poem so I highly appreciate this thank you!

[Harley Quinn]

Very powerful. I enjoyed reading Apocalypsis Mosus.

[ArtisticVisions]

Your poem is stunning! Is the title in Latin or another language? (I've always wanted to learn it) Thanks for sharing!

[Lux in Tenebris]

It is Latin, and thank you for the feedback!

[Jiya]

Very well expressed. I wish I could write like you.

[Lux in Tenebris]

I appreciate that thank you very much, its my first piece of writing and I wanted to get it out. :)

[Jiya]

I would love to read more of your writings.