you want me

you want me

A Poem by Lydia
"

it's friday....and you know what that means....

"

artwork by vidan

 

 

 

 

i dance to the silent music of your lust
a tune so melodious it cannot be heard

random words escape from my lips
              swaying syllables shimmying down
                    a magical banister of longing
truly they possess no valid meaning
yet they deliver sparks you understand
inspiration slides easily
           tense muscles head for the hills
                    suddenly the only truth that matters
                         the only thing i need to believe

                        is
                                     
you want me


© 2013 Lydia


Author's Note

Lydia
it is said men desire women and women desire that desire.....i believe it!

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Ok! Now!
You really shake my body and as of this moment .. i don't know what the hell am doing here on this site and how am typing because right now after read this piece i should be in a 'Washroom'.

O' Lydia, may be your now gonna kill me really, i didn't know you're so warm and kind. Thanks for writing this piece.

By the way, what's a name of that woman who's lying on her bed with her white pillow .. ??
Hey, more importantly what the hell am doing here after all she's awaiting for me .. look .. look at her in the pic. how deliciously she's passing her stunning smile to me and i think she wants me to close her eyes from her behind in the night where me and she're bright without bite but with the beauty of the night that's lying on the bed and asking for my time then who the hell i am to not to go their in her room to make her smile and make her night to make her future bright for the whole life ...

OMG!
SHE'S SO STUNNING! SIZZLING! OMG! SHE'S MADE FOR ME I THINK!

Lydia, Today you really make me wild and sorry, withing few seconds i've to sing out because you made me in a situation to get the hell outta the site and go enter into the washroom tonight for the long time!
Opps!
Yeah! May be for the short time, depends on her warmth But look at her warmth that's lying on the bed and i really don't think she's gonna take me for short time but the long hours!
OMG!
MY HEART'S ON FIRE!
THAT PRETTY LADY'S MY DESIRE!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Years Ago

Laughing here....I think I should send you the art sites I look at to find the artwork to go with my.. read more
Neon

6 Years Ago

Ha! No.. No.. please don't send me the art sites link ..please! Because if you do so then it'd be be.. read more



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it is the ever continuing proof of a male defined femininity - am I beautiful? and gawd yes - you are.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Years Ago

laughing here
Chris

6 Years Ago

quietly smiling... I'm glad you're here... you make a difference Lydi.
Lydia

6 Years Ago

As do you, my friend.
Another sultry dance through the land of sensual poetry, Lydi. And you do that dance so very well! Once again, your images are perfect - I loved the thought of "swaying syllables shimmying down/a magical banister of longing" Bravo! Another A+


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Years Ago

Joyce, so nice to see you are back! Thanks for the wonderful review. Lydi**
I think you are right, Lydi. Beautiful poetry as always and a real pleasure to read. Margaret

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Margaret. lydi**
I agree with you on this one... Women are driven by the emotional, and thus, instead of simply being visually and physically stimulated, we feel the true surge when we know that our lover is completely infatuated with us. I love this concept, and the way that you played it out is so incredibly vivid and real. I cannot give you enough praise for this write, my friend; you truly hit the mark!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Years Ago

Sarah, I am humbled by your review....wow! Thank you very much. Lydi**
That is the truth, Lydi! When your man wants you and you can see the fever in him, that makes a woman just melt. I am speaking from experience, here! This poem is a shouting for the thing that has to happen in a woman's brain for her to open up for her man. Well done! Angi~

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Years Ago

Oh, yes, the brain is an errogenous zone for sure. Thanks, Angi. Lydi**
Well, if it's really believable that men desire women and women admittedly desire that desire what i read through the poem then it's really so good. I enjoyed reading this piece. It's really a true one and here i really can feel the desire of that feel. Well penned write, i loved it much. You've shown me the truth i think by your words... if everybody on the whole world starts thinking the same in that lovely manner to keep a man and a woman happy in the life then the crime'd be leaving this planet indeed... cos, crime comes and generated from us and it only can be go only by changing the thinking about everyone.. thinking always good about everyone always make a life beautiful living. That's all i got from here, i enjoyed this piece, it's so lovely and joyous poem where we can find the love, pain, heart and emotions too in the heart in the life always. Creative write, it's seemed that you've just opened up the page of reality ;) Ok.. so as you mentioned that it's a friday and the piece came from there.. lol then yeh i got it what you wanted to say through this piece .. lol. Brilliant job, an excellent imaginary done by you, I enjoyed this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Years Ago

Thanks for this in depth review! Hope you are enjoying the weekend. Lydi**
I love your poem!
You have condensed a great truth.
Your author's note was spot on as well.
Favorite line for me was, "swaying syllables shimmering down a magical banister of longing".
Wow! What a powerful bit of writing!
Again, you show us elegance!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Years Ago

David, thank you for the time you took to read so many of my words today. I really appreciate the w.. read more
Yeah...... It does feel good doesn't it. I found this poem quite satisfying. Great tension and build up. lol.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Years Ago

:) thank you, Pryde. Lydi**
A tempting repast, succulent in every detail, Lydia. That women should desire the desire... yes, so it would seem; but then only a woman would know the truth of it, n'est-ce pas?

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Years Ago

C'est vrais! Thank you once again. Lydi**
Oh my, this is just stunning. You write sensual poetry so beautiful. I adore these lines

...random words escape from my lips
swaying syllables shimmying down
a magical banister of longing...

This is steamy and sexy with such style Lydia!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Years Ago

What a lovely review...thank you very much! Lydi**

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