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you want me

you want me

A Poem by Lydia
"

it's friday....and you know what that means....

"

artwork by vidan

 

 

 

 

i dance to the silent music of your lust
a tune so melodious it cannot be heard

random words escape from my lips
              swaying syllables shimmying down
                    a magical banister of longing
truly they possess no valid meaning
yet they deliver sparks you understand
inspiration slides easily
           tense muscles head for the hills
                    suddenly the only truth that matters
                         the only thing i need to believe

                        is
                                     
you want me


© 2013 Lydia


Author's Note

Lydia
it is said men desire women and women desire that desire.....i believe it!

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Ok! Now!
You really shake my body and as of this moment .. i don't know what the hell am doing here on this site and how am typing because right now after read this piece i should be in a 'Washroom'.

O' Lydia, may be your now gonna kill me really, i didn't know you're so warm and kind. Thanks for writing this piece.

By the way, what's a name of that woman who's lying on her bed with her white pillow .. ??
Hey, more importantly what the hell am doing here after all she's awaiting for me .. look .. look at her in the pic. how deliciously she's passing her stunning smile to me and i think she wants me to close her eyes from her behind in the night where me and she're bright without bite but with the beauty of the night that's lying on the bed and asking for my time then who the hell i am to not to go their in her room to make her smile and make her night to make her future bright for the whole life ...

OMG!
SHE'S SO STUNNING! SIZZLING! OMG! SHE'S MADE FOR ME I THINK!

Lydia, Today you really make me wild and sorry, withing few seconds i've to sing out because you made me in a situation to get the hell outta the site and go enter into the washroom tonight for the long time!
Opps!
Yeah! May be for the short time, depends on her warmth But look at her warmth that's lying on the bed and i really don't think she's gonna take me for short time but the long hours!
OMG!
MY HEART'S ON FIRE!
THAT PRETTY LADY'S MY DESIRE!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Years Ago

Laughing here....I think I should send you the art sites I look at to find the artwork to go with my.. read more
Neon

6 Years Ago

Ha! No.. No.. please don't send me the art sites link ..please! Because if you do so then it'd be be.. read more



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I so much appreciate the arrangement of the words. The mental picture is well created.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your review. Lydi**
I love how the words of your poem slither up and down your body like a lover's hands. Each line becoming more intense than the next making me want to read faster, challenging my eyes to keep pace. Extremely well written piece and the style an exquisite touch.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lydia

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much. I appreciate your review. Lydi**
That's deep! I love it! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Mike! Lydi**
"the only truth that matters
the only thing i need to believe

is
you want me"

So beautiful and elegant , cascading with splendid desires...Bravo



Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Sami. Have a wonderful weekend. Lydi**
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

You too...You are welcome...:)

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Added on September 27, 2013
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Tags: sensual, love, romance

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