for today and for always

for today and for always

A Poem by Lydia Shutter



artwork by Konstatin Razumov





from the moment
the burning tongue of dawn
licks the sky
        i hunger for your touch
when red arrows of dusk
pierce through clouds
      i crave your kiss
the musky breeze whispers
to enflamed palm fronds
an inferno is sparked
     and so the yearning continues
naughty stars of night
incite passion
my soliloquy is never - changing
mon amour, pour aujourd'hui et pour toujours

© 2013 Lydia Shutter


Author's Note

Lydia Shutter
mon amour, pour aujourd'hui et pour toujours = my love for today and for always

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This is well place passion on the page, which could've been skin the way this quivers, sweats and stretches along a skeletal structure. You can tell you put your soul in it too flesh these words...great anatomy of nature for such a circulation is inspiration...great piece

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

What a fantastic review this is. I thank you so much. Lydi**



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So touching. Like me, when I love someone...it will be forever.
Thanks for this beautiful piece, Lyd**.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your review. LydI**
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

You're welcome.
Such an eloquent medley you have going.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

I appreciate your review! Lydi**
Sounds like an unhappy soul yet hanging on in hope. Those naughty stars ;-)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your review!
"naughty stars of night
incite passion
my soliloquy is never - changing"~ When something this bright burns into your heart it never changes...
it only burns more... intense...

Wonderfully penned, Lydi!~xoxo~:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Robbie. Lydi**
from the moment
the burning tongue of dawn
licks the sky
i hunger for your touch
when red arrows of dusk
pierce through clouds
i crave your kiss
that is simply sublime writing Lydi!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Tammy. I appreciate your review. Lydi**
Inciting passion in its elegance, craving desires in exquisitness...Bravo

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

Sami, I always appreciate your reviews. Thank you. Enjoy your weekend. Lydi**
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You too...You are welcome...:)
The touch of heat...the tone of heart... and the breath of wishes.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

That sums it up! I appreciate the visit, Chris. Lydi**
Someone is a lucky someone. I love your use of French; it is always very fitting.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Pryde. I will remind him! :) Have a great weekend. Lydi**
Oh Lydi, this is truly exquisite, amazingly structured poem, with the imagery of passionate longings
subtlety boiling beneath the surface...i love:

the musky breeze whispers
to enflamed palm fronds
an inferno is sparked
and so the yearning continues
naughty stars of night
incite passion
my soliloquy is never - changing
mon amour, pour aujourd'hui et pour toujours

simply brilliant...thank you for sharing! pen on :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ms. barrie

7 Years Ago

not really, i'm just being honest LOL! :)
Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

I think when we read good poetry, our own poetry improves. Don't sell yourself short...your poetry .. read more
ms. barrie

7 Years Ago

aw thank you, Lydi...for your sweet, encouraging words, I truly appreciate that! I agree but then i.. read more
You know I adore this! And I love the french!

It's true, what you said about the palm fronds...if the sunlight catches them just right, they do appear to be "enflamed". [Of course, only those living in California or Florida would know this.]

Hope you have a wonderful autumn weekend!



Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

7 Years Ago

Autumn really changes nothing here in South Florida....you know that. The palm fronds look the same.. read more
Kelly Scheppers

7 Years Ago

..thanks Lydi!

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Tags: love, romance, sensuality


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