from the moment
the burning tongue of dawn
licks the sky i hunger for your touch when red arrows of dusk
pierce through clouds i crave your kiss
the musky breeze whispers
to enflamed palm fronds
an inferno is sparked and so the yearning continues naughty stars of night
incite passion
my soliloquy is never - changing mon amour, pour aujourd'hui et
pour toujours
This is well place passion on the page, which could've been skin the way this quivers, sweats and stretches along a skeletal structure. You can tell you put your soul in it too flesh these words...great anatomy of nature for such a circulation is inspiration...great piece
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What a fantastic review this is. I thank you so much. Lydi**
What an exquisite poem of such passionate yearning Lydi......be it morning, noon...or night...you keep the flame burning with such elegance and eloquence. "the burning tongue of dawn
licks the sky"....Woww! Lovely, my friend.
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Hello there Sanober! Thank you very much for your review. I am always pleased to see your name on .. read moreHello there Sanober! Thank you very much for your review. I am always pleased to see your name on my page! Lydi**
Every time that burning tongue of dawn licks the sky, there is a thunderstorm of emotion that spills down the page of ecstasy and it keeps the spark alive the whole day long - my Lydia! This is sooooo sensual and beautiful!!
I just had to find the artist of the picture too and his portraits are exquisite, as is your write!
An excellent choice for classy words of passion and sensuality!
And the ending.........oh, I just love it when someone talks dirty in French......kidding of course! (Yes, I know I am often sooo bad). It is a perfect phrase to close your words of yearning!
I feel the sizzle of this one steaming off the page!!
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I've often used Konstatin Razumov's artwork to accompany my words. His ladies are always so elegant.. read moreI've often used Konstatin Razumov's artwork to accompany my words. His ladies are always so elegant. Talking dirty in French? Well, I think anything said in French sounds a little more risque! :) Thank you for your wonderful review, Sheila. I appreciate it. Lydi**
...."the burning tongue of dawn licks the sky", you already had me there....what a great line, this is like the call of the wild, with the classic elegance of Lydi coursei!
Fluffing hair while filing nails and chewing gum here....Frieda says I have classic elegance! LOL .. read moreFluffing hair while filing nails and chewing gum here....Frieda says I have classic elegance! LOL sorry, sick sense of humor! Thank you for this lovely review, Frieda. You know I appreciate it. Have a great evening. Lydi**
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Yes, and I can just picture you saying it in your best Mae West voice too! ha....always, always a pl.. read moreYes, and I can just picture you saying it in your best Mae West voice too! ha....always, always a pleasure Lydi.
Ooh La La, Je L'Adore, Madame Lydi...Art...really nice...Okay, let me gather myself...Sensual in your yearning and truly enjoyed the infusion of French, to round out this magnificent poem.
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Merci! I always appreciate your reviews, Ev. Lydi**
I love it when you throw bits and pieces of french into your poetry, lends a very seductive flair to the overall impact of your poem, very beautifully executed Lydia!
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Merci beaucoup, mon ami! :) I truly appreciate your review. Lydi**
Now this is what I call a day. Lovely my friend. How you have placed the desire for this love between the beautiful descriptions of each part of the day is amazing. Loved this one Lydi.
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Thank you so much, Jack. Love poems will always be my favorite to write. Lydi**
Beautiful artwork and amazing description. Good to crave the kiss and the touch. In the light of the naughty stars that keep the secrets of the night. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
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10 Years Ago
Coyote, I am honored by your review. Thank you very much. Lydi**