an obsession

an obsession

A Poem by Lydia
"

couldn't take my eyes off the blue eyes in the grocery store...heavy sigh

"


photo by Alexandra Adornetto “Xavier” courtesy of blogspot.com







sounding like Friday night
looking like Saturday morning
a little bit
            exciting
more than a little bit
                      intimidating
a walking bowl of delicious
with cobalt blue eyes
can you hear the cacophony of an obsession forming?
there is but one certainty
my fingers will type you tonight

© 2013 Lydia


Author's Note

Lydia
yes, it's Friday! :)

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Love the last line. As blue is my favourite colour, I've always wanted blue eyes. But I'm stuck with dark green...maybe that's more reflective of my personality though haha I must have written a million of these poems over years of looking at people that I'll never know, leaving my imagination to fill in the blanks. A charming piece, with a bit of spice as well ;)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Years Ago

I have blue eyes....and I think looking at someone else's blue eyes can entice and mesmerize. Of co.. read more
kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

You know, I thought they looked blue but I wasn't sure haha Eye contact is an amazing thing when the.. read more



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I love everything about this poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Years Ago

Thanks for going back to find this one, Brittany. Lydi**
Brittany Zedalis

6 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
Love the last line. As blue is my favourite colour, I've always wanted blue eyes. But I'm stuck with dark green...maybe that's more reflective of my personality though haha I must have written a million of these poems over years of looking at people that I'll never know, leaving my imagination to fill in the blanks. A charming piece, with a bit of spice as well ;)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Years Ago

I have blue eyes....and I think looking at someone else's blue eyes can entice and mesmerize. Of co.. read more
kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

You know, I thought they looked blue but I wasn't sure haha Eye contact is an amazing thing when the.. read more
Your writing is direct, to the point, and powerfully expresses a lot with a little. I like it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Years Ago

I appreciate the time you are taking to read my words. Thanks. Lydi**
Is another when I couldn't review the other day with eyes like like that A face like that he is a walking obsession LOL enjoyed

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Years Ago

You know it, Chloe! Thanks again. Lydi**
Chloe..Across the Universe

6 Years Ago

You are very welcome lydia
"Whoeve once said The Eyes Have it" certainly had the pulse of getting one's attention. The eyes are also the windows of the soul, right? Great Emphasis here.
Creative Treatment of Eyes---especially blue.
Old BLUE EYES himself ( singer Frank Sinatra) would be most proud!
Well done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Years Ago

I did love the way Sinatra sang.....but those eyes, well, they are the epitome! Thank you, Doug. L.. read more
It's Thursday here, but I am pretending again. Love your Friday night poetry. Trace

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Trace. I always appreciate your reviews. Lydi**
Oh man...I remember when I got obsessed with blue eyes after watching the lead actor in the Pride and prejudice movie. Those blue seemed to melt into everything around me. And to draw inspiration from a 'walking bowl of delicious'....one of the greatest pleasures of being a poet. ;) Keep those fingers tapping away...my friend. Luscious blue eyes of a poem here.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Years Ago

Nothing quite like getting lost in those eyes, right? :) Thanks, Sanober. Lydi**
Lolz Player Player Now A Days Pimpin Is Easy No Lie HEHE
Well Is Sure Will Have A Pleasure On Friday Nights HEHE ,
Good Stuff My Friend

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lydia

6 Years Ago

Thanks for the review. Lydi*
OnePiece

6 Years Ago

Ur Welcome
Wow, an obsession I would say, aha. I loved this Lydia! This is amazing.... nice way to start to your weekend, lol!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Years Ago

:) Thank you so much. Lydi**
Friday obsession, I must say. We all have such naughtiness sometimes, haven't we?
Nice wordplay.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Years Ago

Thank you!

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