in your dreams

it's friday!

“dancing queen” by dyanne parker

courtesy of etsy.com dyanneparkerart

my red dress
will hang
on the chair
beside you
leaving me
in only
ivory skin
pouty lips
and a hint of jasmine

penetrating desire
will embrace us
as dionysus
winks from
the mirror
channeling secrets
of carnal pleasure

just for tonight
let me lie down
in your dreams
where threads
of passion
will meander
‘tween fibers of lust
and all will be right
with the world

Reviews

[MsJewel]

my red dress
will hang
on the chair
beside you
leaving me
in only
ivory skin
pouty lips
and a hint of jasmine...

Your Friday night writes are just as passionate on a Wednesday night.
This is so simple and yet so softly sensual and elegant...I am speechless. You have outdone yourself.

:) Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you sweet friend of mine. I so appreciate your reviews. Lydi**

[Beccy]

Goodness Lydia, never have I been a pessimist, but life is what it is, and even as a poet realism sometimes peeps through.

Mind you, I'm not complaining, I have a beautiful son who means to world.

Beccy.

[Dr. Wood ?]

I see that you have not COOLED down in my absence Lydi...a fine write...but what else is new?

[Lydia Shutter]

Hello Dr.....this was actually one I posted in January....I was gone for quite a while this year myself. Thanks for stopping by. Hope all is well with you. Lydi**

[Dr. Wood ?]

fine here Lydi...well..absence and hearts and fonder and all of that....Thanks for asking

[Beccy]

Not so much sad, more an acceptance that life is rarely a Mills and Boon novel.

[Lydia Shutter]

There is a thin line between being a realist and being a pessimist.

[Beccy]

Those are moments to cherish. Always I await with bated breath, though mostly I remain disappointed.

Beccy.

[Lydia Shutter]

That's sad, Beccy. Thanks for stopping by.

[Trace]

And they call me the master of Desires.
WOW, this is AWESOME....
Love the way you see the world, specially when you get all naughty and stuff.

Trace

[Lydia Shutter]

"all naughty and stuff" LOL Trace, you tickle my funny bone! thank you so much. Lydi**

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Lydi... a delightful lusty poem...
Pouty lips and a hint of Jasmine will
always bring excitement to a moonlit
rendezvous. truly... Pat

[Lydia Shutter]

It's always a kick when a friend reads one of my older poems, Pat. Thank you so much. Have a wonderful weekend. Lydi**

[EloisaWrites]

Short, precise, simple and romantic. I imagined everything in candlelight. This is beautiful. :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Eloisa. I appreciate your review. Lydi**

[NeiL ArandA]

Your wording and descriptions are like the Song of Solomon . Innocent intimate pure love . I wish Icould write like this ...

[Lydia Shutter]

Neil, you are a talented writer. Don't sell yourself short. thank you once again for your review. Lydi**

[JenniferMarie]

What a wonderful first stanza. I enjoyed the entire poem and can relate to these emotions. Thank you for sharing.

[Lydia Shutter]

I appreciate your review. Lydi**

[JenniferMarie]

You're welcome. I'm happy to review.

[Ruth]

Sensual and evocative. The losing of all other burdens to just be, simply be...in a moment of fusion in embracing sensation. This is truly magnificent. I could read you all day Lydi x

[Lydia Shutter]

You make me feel wonderful, my friend. Thank you. Lydi**

[Ruth]

Deserved, you write wonderful! lol

[Lydia Shutter]

:) you are a sweetie.