even as

“after the storm” photo ©  all rights reserved

 by mauritzson photo

even as rain punishes the window pane

with fierce retribution

yearnings peek out over the horizon

        memories of midnight meetings

                of a love never meant to be

creep into my consciousness

no, it would never work and truly it didn=t

and yet your voice

speaking my name

        the way no one ever had before

                or ever will again

is all i hear tonight

even as the rain punishes the window pane

Reviews

[ANCIENTRUNAWAY]

Once again , another piece of art and shining Gem. Insightful is the whole meaning of this craft and I greatly respect that! I sense individuality confusion and that they are trying to hear closely to the everlasting rain for a hint or even a sign ! Your writings are utterly marvelous, my dear!

Keep Calm and Carry On

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you once again. Lydi**

[Desert Knave]

Awesome. Cannot really choose a favorite line as it all spoke to me. I do love the choice to open and close with the same line ... it just adds that extra bit of luster to this flawless gem. ~Jim

[Lydia Shutter]

Jim, you are always so kind with your reviews. As I am sure you have noticed, I have not posted in many weeks. I will return...eventually. Hope all is well with you. Thank you. Lydi**

[Desert Knave]

All is well-ish. It will be better when you return. I look forward to your poetry and take inspiration from it. Looking forward to your next write and then the next ... etc. Be good to yourself, that is what I have been trying to learn to do for myself. ~Jim

[Lydia Shutter]

Will do, my friend. Be well.

[BlackRose]

Beautifully penned, as if your inside her world with those same or similar thoughts hearing the rain hitting away. Once again, LOVE it. :o)

[Lydia Shutter]

I appreciate your review. Thank you. Lydi**

[cycy]

this is a beautiful poem Lydia, i enjoyed reading it very much, well written :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Cycy. Lydi**

[Listmaker]

Love your writing. You write with such clarity. I love your phrasing. Like the use of beginning and ending with the same powerful line.

[Lydia Shutter]

I appreciate your review so much. Lydi**

[EloisaWrites]

Wow. This is beautiful. I have read so many poems that is art but it is hard to write them artistically and at the same time, makes one sigh in its beauty. I truly am a fan of your writing. I LOVE this. :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Eloisa. Lydi**

[A. Amos]

your poetry is like classical music

[Lydia Shutter]

What a lovely thing to say. Thank you. Lydi**

[A. Amos]

You are most welcome, I really felt it while reading your words a beautiful harmony was playing deep down in my soul. That is your magic consider me your fan and I can't wait to buy your work.

[Trace]

WOW, sweet memories.

NICE.

Trace

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks, Trace. Lydi**

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

You just don't know how this piece touched me deeply, Lydi. This is so heartbreaking. Words are powerful enough to leave cuts in someone's heart. You're great!
Thank you for sharing this.

[Lydia Shutter]

You are such a sweetheart. Thank you, my friend. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and sad journey into your words. Some places we can't return to and the memories can become more painful than sweet. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, my friend. Lydi**