how much

how much

A Poem by Lydia Shutter
"

there is something very special about spending time with either of my granddaughters

"

         


painting by elaine feliciano courtesy of etsy.com NYoriginalpaintings

 






                    today

                                     you skipped

across the tense span of my life

scattering the baggage i've been forced to carry

                to parts unknown

          it’s true

while the sun was high in the sky

the strangely familiar flavor of happiness

danced across my taste buds

like spring rain watering flowers

your smile nourished my soul

                    that’s why

i’ll always write you poems full of sweetness

even put some icing and sprinkles on the top

hoping someday you will understand

how much your oma loves you

 

© 2014 Lydia Shutter


Author's Note

Lydia Shutter
I spent the afternoon with my oldest granddaughter today. What a boost for my attitude. Just love my granddaughters!

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what a beautiful sentiment.. you can feel the pure joy and love in this one girl.. I hope you are saving these for them to read later... imagery is whimsical and playful, it makes my heart smile as your radiant spirit dances across the page in sheer bliss.. what a sight to behold.. just lovely...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

I am, April....and they know I write poetry about them. They are the light in my life. Thanks for .. read more
AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

you're more than welcome.. and that is awesome.. something that all of you can treasure.. warms my h.. read more



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This is beautiful and light, made me think of my lovely God-children.

I enjoyed it very much :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Madison. Lydi**
This is adoring and touching. You capture the essence of happiness that only children can bring. Your insight is penned so well I knew it was about children before I read your note. This is a lovely poem. Your love for them obviously knows no bounds :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Thank you for going back to find this one. My granddaughters are very important to me, absolutely! .. read more
Your grand daughter is the luckiest girl ever to have you in her life. Your love for her resonates through your words here and is just so touching.

Regards
Troy

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Troy....I am one lucky grandmother to have the two most wonderful granddaughter.. read more
What a glorious gift they must be and what a wonderful gift of a poem. Definitely a smile-bringer. ~Jim

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Jim. Lydi**
A truly heart-warming poem, Lydi. Your love for your granddaughter shines like the candle you light on top of your poem-cake. Terrific poetry, one of your best, I'd say!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Joyce. Being with either of my granddaughters is special for me. Lydi**
Loved the structure here, great details, and awesome finish!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much! Lydi**
A. Amos

9 Years Ago

You're most welcome
Your radiance is almost tangible such is the depth of feeling formed through these creative, poetic lines, and how blessed you are to have them close by, quality time indeed !

Wonderfully exuberant !

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Oh, yes, I am very fortunate they live nearby, absolutely, Tom. Thank you for your review. Lydi**
Your love for them shines through here. Very touching poem indeed! ^-^

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Shaquana. Lydi**
this is quite touching, Lydi...

they will really appreciate this piece, someday.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

I do hope so, Jacob. Thank you. Lydi**

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