tasting the morning

tasting the morning

A Poem by Lydia
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sitting on my porch this morning.....amazing sunrise earned a poem

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"mimosa sunrise" by savlen







the sun jiggles like jello

in the dish of dawn

i ponder its flavor

cherry-orange-lemon

if it were a nail polish color

it would have a clever name

                        “amore a la italia” perhaps

or “a kiss of morning”

must write a thank you note to the artist

but where to send it?

no,  instead i  will sit here

tasting the morning

© 2015 Lydia


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Very original ponderings, upon a delightful sunrise. I love mornings & I could feel your enjoyment, as well as your thoughts dancing around from idea to idea. I always forget to mention this, but your choice of artwork is always perfect for your piece & also startlingly vivid, just like your writing.

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Lydia

3 Years Ago

I spent a lot of years working in an advertising agency/sign shop. I feel the artwork is part of th.. read more



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Very original ponderings, upon a delightful sunrise. I love mornings & I could feel your enjoyment, as well as your thoughts dancing around from idea to idea. I always forget to mention this, but your choice of artwork is always perfect for your piece & also startlingly vivid, just like your writing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

3 Years Ago

I spent a lot of years working in an advertising agency/sign shop. I feel the artwork is part of th.. read more
One of the benefits of working on a mountain, is the sunrises I get to experience,
I take lots of glorious pictures, but haven't found a way to describe them quite as
cleverly as you have here.

Love the taste of your sunrise.

Trace

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Lydia

3 Years Ago

Thanks again, Trace. Lydi**
wowww lovely jello..lovely dish of dawn ,
cherry-orange -lemon ....so beautifully described ..
love it !!!

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Lydia

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Lily. Lydi**
An original take on a sunrise - one that brings it down-to-earth in its descriptions without diminishing it in anyway. Beautiful!


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Lydia

3 Years Ago

Thank you, Solar. Lydi**
A lovely insight into a simple
moment in time and so well
Described, Really liked it Lydia.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Lydia

3 Years Ago

Paddy, you are so kind. Thank you very much. Lydi**
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SKY
“a kiss of morning”, sun jiggles like jello, tasting the morning full art & joy for readers.
It's really a readers delight! Thanks for sharing a beauty of thoughts, you really rocks!!!! :)

And yes the picture goes perfect with poetry!

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Lydia

3 Years Ago

Skyfall, I appreciate your review of the poem and the fact you noticed the artwork. I search for so.. read more
SKY

3 Years Ago

Pleasure is mine! Most Welcome :)
I only read the title and was already licking my lips. I love how your poetry completely absorbs into me. Sunrises are so special, with all the colours and emotions they bring on. I rarely catch them these days, so glad to read this. Oh, how i want to just paint my nails an 'amore a la italia'. there just cannot be a better name! Tasting your words is another experience to cherish.

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Lydia

3 Years Ago

My sweet friend, reading your reviews just makes my day so much sweeter! Thank you. Lydi**
No note needed, just a prayer of thanks. Lovely words with great imagery. Love the jello analogy. Very nice work.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Lydia

3 Years Ago

You are taking so much time to read me today. Thank you once again. Lydi**
Willard Wells

3 Years Ago

Well it is the luck of the draw sometimes the way I do it now, but I am reading and enjoying more as.. read more
I agree. I love the early morning.
"no, instead i will sit here
tasting the morning"
Good to taste the morning. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry dear Lydia.
Coyote

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Lydia

3 Years Ago

You are so kind. Thank you, John. Lydi**
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

You are welcome Lydia.
There truly is fire for the spirit and heart in a dawn like that. Each colour has meaning, each hue has a means to touch here, there and there again. And dear Lord, thank your God or gods for yet another day's welcome - tis good to be, isn't it. Brava, Lydi.. and not for the first time.

Wishing you everything you wish for yourself and your darlings through Christmas and long into the future. x

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Lydia

3 Years Ago

My dear Emma, thank you so much. May you have many loved ones surrounding you on Christmas and may .. read more

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