Goodnight

Goodnight

A Poem by Lydia

artwork by Jenny Hambleton "Girls Curls"



Conversation bends at the waist
sleepy eyes drink in love brewed with desire
amazing how well your arms feed my sensuality
                 allowing it to blossom
but the truth is my morning caffeine has eloped
with things better left unsaid
            can you hear them?
impenetrable curves of night enter the picture perfectly
yet this edgy poem screams to be scribbled
before slumber has her way with me
and I kiss dreams of you goodnight

© 2016 Lydia


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I enjoyed this poem dear Lydia. Felt like a morning whisper.
"but the truth is my morning caffeine has eloped
with things better left unsaid
can you hear them?"
Morning caffeine can alert the mind to be careful. A perfect ending to the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Years Ago

Thanks so much, John. Lydi**
Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.



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I enjoyed this poem dear Lydia. Felt like a morning whisper.
"but the truth is my morning caffeine has eloped
with things better left unsaid
can you hear them?"
Morning caffeine can alert the mind to be careful. A perfect ending to the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Years Ago

Thanks so much, John. Lydi**
Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
Oh Lydia..........atmospheric dreams wrap this beauty around sensuous brilliance. I could feel desire lifting passion all the way to the sky. Whoa!

Regards,
Al

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Al. Lydi**
The opener -- that's really great. Another clever, sexy, subtle write.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Years Ago

I appreciate your review so much. Lydi*
I need to read more of you,
your writing has found its way into my soul,
and I know I am a better writer because of you.

Thank you for writing like this my friend,

This is pure poetry at its best.

Trace

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Years Ago

WOW, that is a major compliment. Thank you so much. Lydi*
I enjoyed the imagery used to convey your thoughts. I loved your poem and I'm glad you finished it before slumber carried you off.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Julian. Lydi**
This is a beautiful and sensual write,love the flow of it and the hidden meaning,it's lovely;-]

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Years Ago

thanks so much. Lydi**
I absolutely loved it from beginning to end as always.

"Conversation bends at the waist
sleepy eyes drink in love brewed with desire
amazing how well your arms feed my sensuality
allowing it to blossom"

took my breath away!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Tiana. I appreciate your review. Lydi**
"Conversation bends at the waist." What a lovely opening line Lydi. A foretaste of what is to come in the following poem. Bravo as always my dear. ~SP

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Sharon. Lydi**
I have always loved your poems and this one is another one of yours that has captured me. I like this line (yet this edgy poem screams to be scribbled)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Cassie. When the words are ready to be written, we have to listen! :) Lydi**
Are guys allowed to sigh? Oh well, too bad if they are not...sigh. A poetic lullaby with a melody all its own. Very beautiful.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

4 Years Ago

Of course you are! :) thank you very much for your review. I appreciate it. Lydi**

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