just maybe

just maybe

A Poem by Lydia


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i'm not close enough to taste your breath
to feel your touch
still there's a whole chorus of emotion 
coursing through my body 
singing lines from a script its written
one of passion, longing, desire
so as i plant this kiss on my palm
know that it springs from a universe of love
and as i blow it in your direction
it's much more than a fumbled flirtation
because i hope that maybe
just maybe
you will smile as it touches your stubbled cheek

© 2019 Lydia


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i would hope the receiver of this kiss would smile...
such a well-written gesture is put forth here....
my head, my thoughts have reached out in this way before...knowing i couldn't actually touch...but the imagination can sometimes make the feeling still happen.
j.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Months Ago

Precisely. Thanks so much, Jacob. Lydi**



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So sweet. A love you can feel from anywhere

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

5 Months Ago

Thanks very much, Lyn. Lydi**
A lovely kiss for stubbled cheek
is meant to last at least a week,
but if it's not much bother,
could I please have another?

A lovely bit of writing...tinged with emotion and hopefulness and just the right amount of earthly desire...(is there a better kind?)

A good write, Lydi.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Months Ago

Smiling here....nice ditty there, Ted. Thank you for the lovely review. Lydi**
Your elegance and charm and sence of romance, with a tinge of the sensual, is always such a pleasure to read. Always uplifting.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Months Ago

John, thank you so much. Lydi**
A fumbled flirtation that overwhelmingly registers on a richter scale could only come from the proximity of you, Lydi.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Months Ago

Kelly, you are sight for sore eyes! Thanks so much. Lydi**
You take this genre to a whole different level Lydi** as of now, shavins for sissies and I aint gonna floss all week..... a delight to find on a Friday eve and true.... Neville

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Months Ago

Smiling here...thanks so much, Neville. Always appreciate your reviews. LydI**
Neville

6 Months Ago

always a pleasure.. N x
That last line is a killer. But then they all are. Such rich romance Lydi. Simply beautiful.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Months Ago

Thanks so much, Ken. Lydi**
how did you know i haven't shaved for a few days??? ;)))))) i think the sensuality is just right ... the romance big and very very relatable ... time and distance can very well be myths when intent and focus are in play ... we are connected in more ways than phone lines, satellites, and physical contact aren't we?!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Months Ago

Absolutely, my friend. Thank you so much for the review. Lydi**
Gentle, wonderful and kind words shared. Lucky man would feel the warmth of the sweet kiss. Thank you Lydia for sharing the poetry for the kiss.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Months Ago

Thank you, John. Lydi*
Coyote Poetry

6 Months Ago

You are welcome dear Lydia.
Where were you forty years ago?

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Months Ago

Smiling here....I was married and had a baby....and I worked 50 hours a week. Thanks for the visit... read more
Great photo Lydi- is she the iconic Marilyn? Your poem is effervescent and its seductive bubbles tantalize. The style is wonderfully intimate, personal, playful, warm. What red-blooded man could resist your poetic wiles? I think none. Excellent write!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

6 Months Ago

Not sure if it is Marilyn Monroe. I doubt it though. She never wore such pale lipstick! :) Roman.. read more
Annette Pisano-Higley

6 Months Ago

You’re right! And you are very welcome, my friend.

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