kiss me

kiss me

A Poem by Lydia


the world is crazy 
so don't hesitate 
kiss me
take off that mask you wear
see me
for who I really am
fanciful and whimsical
hold my hand 
follow the pathway of stars
to the pot of gold
then kiss me
like it's the end of the world

© 2020 Lydia


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There is an adv. of a choclate company...
Kiss Me, Close Your Eyes
Miss Me, Close Your Eyes
And Kiss Me,
I Can Read Your Lips
On Your Fingertips
I Can Feel Your Smile
Come On My Lips
And Happiness In Your Eyes

Kiss Me, Close Your Eyes

It's been one of my fav... reminded me of it when i read your poem...
Kiss is surely a wonderful thing from your loved one...in this crazy mad world :)
I enjoyed reading this...thank you for sharing...

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

1 Month Ago

Close your eyes, kiss me is all they keep saying in it. Cute commercial, but nothing like my words... read more
Ardra

1 Month Ago

The long one was in different version :)
Your words are always better any day :))
Lydia

1 Month Ago

Awww, thanks.



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Your poem hits on something that doesn't compute with me . . . that masks may be with us for a long time. There's nobody I want to snuggle , so what you're expressing doesn't hinder me personally, but I really feel for those starting adulthood & not being free to see wholehearted smiles & feel others faces without restrictions. I agree that people need to follow rules & I'm lucky to live in the boondocks where people live far enuf apart so nobody takes precautions. I really don't want to live in this world, which is what I'm catching from your poem. The urge to rip off that mask must be unfathomable at times! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

2 Weeks Ago

Masks are a way of life now, sadly. Even if we don't like them, we wear them. After all, who loves.. read more
beautiful ... the sentiment well needed these days .. i wrote a poem one time long ago (yt just yesterday) in which i closed with kiss me kiss me kiss me .. it won her over and how i trembled :) we shared a kiss but there was a clearly stated end point .. i didn't care tho .. any heart break was worth that kiss alone ;) great wonderful, elegantly stated, sexy poem Lydia .. a favorite for sure .. Happy Fourth of July my friend!
E.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

1 Month Ago

Happy 4th to you as well, E. Stay safe. Thanks so much for the review. Lydi**
Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

;) ................
Seems its the ideal time when kiss. hug, hold, sweet romance and trust are genuine emotions to follow through. It's not a time to take advantage or fling caution to the wind BUT a precious moment to accept time could be short. Think: how to, where to, why and what for and vitally - who with. Too late will be what it means: no kisses ever - if ever were. Lydi, your words nudge thoughts, wind up intentions, whisper 'this is where it's at.. if meant to be. '

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

1 Month Ago

I always love your reviews, Emma. Thank you so much. Lydi**
Indeed, the world is crazy at this time. I don't know if it's ending or not, but the call for intimacy is good, whatever.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

1 Month Ago

Thanks, John. Lydi*
Words softly insistent, coaxing one to
deny the world and follow the heart' till
one find their heaven...
Love is all about throwing caution
to the winds. Indeed, what's life
without a deep, heartfelt kiss...?
I deeply felt the passion, Ms. Lydi

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

1 Month Ago

Pestonjee, there is nothing quite like a kiss....thanks for the wonderful review. Lydi**
Pestonjee

4 Weeks Ago

It was a pleasure all mine 🌹
(kiss me like it's the end of the world) And perhaps it is. Always a joy to read your words my friend. ~Sharon

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

1 Month Ago

Thanks so much, Sharon. Be safe. Lydi**
What a spectacular piece of art, the image and the poem. This is packed with so much imagery and emotion. On the surface, this is an extraordinary greeting card. Beneath the surface, embedded within the words and phrases is a yearning for intimacy, the one thing we've lost this year. That makes it a remarkable poem.

I've been surprised how much different a person looks with only their eyes showing. Though we give much attention to the eyes, especially in poetry, the nose, lips, cheeks, chin make the portrait (as with the art here). We need the whole person to love, and it's sad a virus has denied us that desire, at least for the moment. This poem brings hope. Lovely poem, Lydia.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

1 Month Ago

The eyes say a lot, but the lips and cheeks back up what the eyes say. Without them, it is difficul.. read more
R.E. Ray

1 Month Ago

You're welcome. I always enjoy your work.
Interesting poem about showing your true self. Sometimes it's hard being the person you want to be.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

1 Month Ago

Thank you, JungLee. Lydi**
JungLee

1 Month Ago

You are welcome!
A kiss can change anything. Your poem have power to lift up human soul from mud of suffering. A picture is nice as well. Thank you for beautiful creation.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

1 Month Ago

Thanks, Poet. I appreciate your review. Lydi**
Martin ?

1 Month Ago

Thank you I really did enjoyed your poem.
Lydi... the pathway to Stars in your photo
is that "touch" of the divine as though your
poetry is more positive than anything we
could read or hear in the Media. You are the "hope"
in the Corner of Pandora's box. I find your poem to
be a "locket of endearment" to embrace romance
'as if it were the end of the world'. gently, Pat


Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

1 Month Ago

Thank you very much, Pat. Yes, we must embrace romance whenever we can. Lydi**

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