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and believe

and believe

A Poem by Lydia Shutter


artwork by roy pederson                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             
sit down right here with me
talk about nothing for hours
or talk about something
just stay here
be with me
reflect on the good things
and believe
i want to be one of them

© 2021 Lydia Shutter


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Your picture depicts the real meaning of the poem. Sitting beside the vast and lofty nature can make us forget everything... Every pain or every lowness of life. We are among this nature, just a part of it can make us forget everyday life.... This is just awesome

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

3 Years Ago

Sima, thank you so much for the review. Lydi**



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Wow, this is so nice, Lydia, great job.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

3 Years Ago

I appreciate your review! Lydi**
light and ashes

3 Years Ago

You're welcome! :)
I am wondering whether this is a follow on poem to your Betrayal? It seems connected, and I sense here a desire to get baggage sorted however long it takes. The final three lines speak to me. I get a real sense here that the air needs to clear and for that betrayal to be smoothed over, even if not forgotten. You know, I found this very relatable Lydi**, other readers will too.

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

3 Years Ago

Your take on the poem was not my intention, but, yes, it could seem that way. I am honored you reme.. read more

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