You are right dear Lydia.
"the music of silence dances
on the jagged curve of a moonbeam
and still i am the one worrying
must remember, ashes, ashes, we all do fall down
don't we?"
I understand the above lines. We must release the worry and go forward. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote
The universe is subject to entropy, time, rot, rust and decay. Things break down and go awry without reason. Tomorrow is neither promised nor secure, ever. But let us live before we die and not die feeling that we have not lived. I enjoyed.
Your poem describes the vast majority of insomnia stalkers who suffer an overactive mind. I'm lucky my insomnia comes with a blank mind, so it's not as vexing as in your poem. I can feel the vexation! Clever wording, as always! (((HUGS)))
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If worrying burned calories, Margie, I would be a beanpole! :) Thanks for the review...and sleep w.. read moreIf worrying burned calories, Margie, I would be a beanpole! :) Thanks for the review...and sleep well. Lydi**
Yes, the darkness is stronger in the night. That's when worry comes. (I listen to audio books to turn off my thoughts.) I especially like these lines:
the music of silence dances
on the jagged curve of a moonbeam
You are right dear Lydia.
"the music of silence dances
on the jagged curve of a moonbeam
and still i am the one worrying
must remember, ashes, ashes, we all do fall down
don't we?"
I understand the above lines. We must release the worry and go forward. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote