don't we?

don't we?

A Poem by Lydia Shutter


                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      




sometimes there's an itch
just below the surface
a vague "something's not quite right"
nudging my psyche
a hunger overtakes me
usually at dark thirty
how many calories are burned worrying?
and why am i awake thinking of this anyway?
will i be happy on the other side of morning?
the music of silence dances
on the jagged curve of a moonbeam
and still i am the one worrying 
must remember,  ashes, ashes, we all do fall down
don't we?

© 2021 Lydia Shutter


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You are right dear Lydia.
"the music of silence dances
on the jagged curve of a moonbeam
and still i am the one worrying
must remember, ashes, ashes, we all do fall down
don't we?"
I understand the above lines. We must release the worry and go forward. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

2 Years Ago

Thank you once again, John. Lydi**
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome dear Lydia.



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The universe is subject to entropy, time, rot, rust and decay. Things break down and go awry without reason. Tomorrow is neither promised nor secure, ever. But let us live before we die and not die feeling that we have not lived. I enjoyed.

Posted 2 Years Ago


We have the same itch, and worrying should burn all our calories! I enjoyed this, thank you.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

2 Years Ago

I wish that it did! Thanks so much, Patricia! Lydi**
Patricia

2 Years Ago

You’re welcome;)
Thanks so much for this review. Lydi**

Posted 2 Years Ago


Such a smooth, relaxing, and fun read, thanks.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your poem describes the vast majority of insomnia stalkers who suffer an overactive mind. I'm lucky my insomnia comes with a blank mind, so it's not as vexing as in your poem. I can feel the vexation! Clever wording, as always! (((HUGS)))

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

2 Years Ago

If worrying burned calories, Margie, I would be a beanpole! :) Thanks for the review...and sleep w.. read more
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Gee
Aye, the dark, wee hours when even the most trivial thought is magnified beyond sane :)
Can relate to this though thoughts are often work related😩


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

2 Years Ago

Middle of the night angst is the worst! Thanks for your review, Gee. Lydi**
Oh I so empathise with this well written poem. The lines fit so well with me. Especially in the dark thirty.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

2 Years Ago

Sorry you can empathize, Ken. Unfortunately, too many of us can. Thanks for the visit. Lydi**
Yes, the darkness is stronger in the night. That's when worry comes. (I listen to audio books to turn off my thoughts.) I especially like these lines:
the music of silence dances
on the jagged curve of a moonbeam

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Shelley. Lydi***
Shelley Warner

2 Years Ago

You're welcome
You are right dear Lydia.
"the music of silence dances
on the jagged curve of a moonbeam
and still i am the one worrying
must remember, ashes, ashes, we all do fall down
don't we?"
I understand the above lines. We must release the worry and go forward. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

2 Years Ago

Thank you once again, John. Lydi**
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome dear Lydia.
(how many calories are burned worrying?) If worrying DID burn calories, I'd be hanging from a key chain by now! Love this write Lydi. ~Sharon

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia Shutter

2 Years Ago

We could share that keychain, Sharon! Smiling here. Thanks so much for the review. Lydi**

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