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Under Pressure

Under Pressure

A Poem by Lyndsay Castro

A different kind of pressure


So hard to push this pain away

It swells in waves too hard to bear

My effort and my nerves are frayed

I long for when I had no cares


But now I'm under pressure, pain

My hands shake and sweat and try

To forget the time when I had gained

And never lost, the time I could fly


The sun shines through my window, bright

Yet my souls migraine turns away

Why can't I shrug off my small plight?

I can't ignore this pain today




copywrite 2008 Lyndsay Castro

© 2008 Lyndsay Castro

Author's Note

Lyndsay Castro
A bad Fibromyalgia day.

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i like the idea of a soul having a migraine...

the rhyme is not trite, which is good :-)

forMARZly yours

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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11 Reviews
Added on August 7, 2008
Last Updated on August 7, 2008


Lyndsay Castro
Lyndsay Castro

Houston, TX

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