Let down your hair

Let down your hair

A Poem by Lyric

Little girl, little girl, let down your hair.
Let them pull it up by the roots and by God I swear if you even show a speck of remorse or care I'll tie you down to a burning chair. Little girl, little girl, let them whip your freedom and pull your head bare.

© 2015 Lyric


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A bit gruesome, but honestly I like it. I'd like to compare it to life in general. Everyone has someone or something pulling at their strands, and even the slightest whimper does little more than make the whole situation worse.

Good job :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lyric

8 Years Ago

Thanks :-)

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Added on May 24, 2015
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Lyric
Lyric

Newark, NJ



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Hi, I love to write and I'd just really like some feed back on all of my stuff, and I love to read other poets'/writers' work more..

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