This is rich with passion and it drips imagery, each line was so tangible my mind was literally able to walk within the muse. It shows just how truly brilliant you are simply because while reading I was able to imagine temperature, time, fragrances, sounds, lighting and even the atmosphere of this beautiful moment you described.
I like the progressions and structure, your dedication is evident in all of your work because It always feels so polished, calm and assured. I love the manner by which you write of different subjects, in that I never sense hesitation and its that type of confidence and transparency that has elevated the greatest of writers.
Its your virtue and the pure unabashed emotions and verbal sketches you manufacture that have made you unforgettable. These are just a few of the countless reasons I'm a fan, I feel privileged whenever my mind ingests another side of yours... Thank you! :)
The moon is said to effect my birth sign, I think it effects all, your poem says everything I feel when I don't see it and also how I feel about others that I can't or haven't seen in a while.
Feeling. and Being...
Yes always, feeling always being is so much how we all feel, the ending is so powerful.
The moon makes me feel emotions and see them in my dreams. I have always found a comfort in the alluring rays of the moon and its silvery dreamy light casting warmth upon my face as I lay still in my bed watching it remembering many romantic and emotional times under its silky rays.
A comfort comes form its glow and a fixed goodnight as well. A well written romantic metaphoric poem. I liked it very much made me think of many things in the emotionally remembered memories highway in life .Well Written piece again !!!!
Thank you for sharing
Lasla
This poem seems to have a sort of romantic mystery to it, painted so well by your lunar imagery. Some of your phrasings are quite intriguing. My favorite was the seeming paradox in the line, "giving my breast the fullness of a new moon." That is a very sweet bit of writing. I also liked the very sensuous imagery at the end, "with each soft chill that caresses my face." Lovely!
NIce poem, and it opens up my mind as well to memories where i felt my past lover or lover was near, when he really was far away. but you can feel each other's spirits, i dated a guy who i was that connected with where we could hear each other's thoughts, and feel each other's emotions, even when not around each other....this poem made me remember that spiritual connection i had with only one.
this reminds me of a piece i wrote called, "fallen" i will send it to you, because your piece is so beautiful, and i enjoyed it very much.
This is rich with passion and it drips imagery, each line was so tangible my mind was literally able to walk within the muse. It shows just how truly brilliant you are simply because while reading I was able to imagine temperature, time, fragrances, sounds, lighting and even the atmosphere of this beautiful moment you described.
I like the progressions and structure, your dedication is evident in all of your work because It always feels so polished, calm and assured. I love the manner by which you write of different subjects, in that I never sense hesitation and its that type of confidence and transparency that has elevated the greatest of writers.
Its your virtue and the pure unabashed emotions and verbal sketches you manufacture that have made you unforgettable. These are just a few of the countless reasons I'm a fan, I feel privileged whenever my mind ingests another side of yours... Thank you! :)