Veracity (diary, May 2011)

Decided to post old poems from my diary.

The curve of life might carry out

There, where Truth boils

Where feelings win

And mind rejoices

Ways that lead are known to me

But thoughts are mere, severe actions only real

Thus, all the forces I devote

To find the way to place remote,

This world is filled with doubts and drama

I cast away them into past

Will take with me my bless and karma

And vivid call of Gaia, at last

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

I especially enjoyed the beginning lines, "where feelings win and mind rejoices"

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is amazing. I like the desire and the strong description in this poem.
"Where feelings win
And mind rejoices"
Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[joshua deathdealer]

A very nice poem indeed. I love it.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A very fine poem :D