Magic. diary (March 2010)

believe...

Lies are disliked. But somehow at night to the son

My grandma and mom lied very much, damn

And all those tvheroes did not help me at all

Playing outside, was beaten by bullies, 5 years old

I gave up on tales, caught father's hand

And hinted gently ''Now i know who''

Puts presents to me under holiday tree

That boogeyman's creed, is not more unsafe

than presumed freedom

Lies are disliked,

Wonderland, apparently, doesn't happen on this planet

In the 10th grade, I want to throw up from school already

He fell in love the first time and then aesthetics

Almost began to shout at all the places

That marvels are everywhere and tie you like everyday laces

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A lot of thoughts in the poem. Each with it's own story and scar. A lot of mystery in the words. I like the flow of the poem and the strong ending. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Lydia]

This is a very fine poem, well written.

[joshua deathdealer]

Excellent thought provoking write. Well done.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Terrific piece of writing....
captures so much...a lifetime, in this poem..
great stuff!!!

[Lily Mae]

Love it as a whole but the last line seals it up so well.. the word lie alone encompasses so much for any one.. on a singular level and in society...well done...x