Wishing

Wishing

A Poem by dread or dismay.

Wishing

 

 

Sheer bliss,

The only way,

 

 I don't care what you think,

Thoose lies so petty, so little,

I don't like him.

 

You say you have him in you're pocket,

But why not in mine?

Is he suddenly youre's?

You're already taken!

 

My friend says you do,

You think he's all your's.

But have you ever thought he maybe likes me?

 

Or are you fufilled?

You like everyone, now?

You can have them all, surely.

 

You think you're so great,

Sick. Its disgusting.

Hypocrite you are,

When you say its so scummy,

What they do,

When you follow, so "Blissfully".

 

I keep coming back for more,

Staring so lovingly,

Eviller then danger,

Leaving you behind.

 

I wish I could live every minute like it was my last one.

Then maybe I'd have the guts,

To open my heart to you.

 

You talk to me so simply,

Best friends forever,

Connected from another.

 

Giving me the moment,

Wishing I could just lie.

You're in my heart,

Wishing I had you.

I'll never forget you.

 

© 2008 dread or dismay.


Author's Note

dread or dismay.
This a poem, dedicated to, well... ^^

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This poem is interesting. It sounds like someone has you confused, and the words seem to flow in a confused pattern. I would direct it a little more, but the thoughts are great. Nice Job!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked it better then "hide and seek" but it falls on the same lines as far as errors in my eyes go. Font is too small. and it did better in the sense of leaving me thinking but still it tells too much for my tastes.
good job though. i think i will go read the rest of your work now.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this sorta reminds me of when that girl said i fathered her baby...she thought every guy was in love with her and belonged to her...and in the end shes all alone...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the internal tone of this. It feels like someone thinking. They way it twists back and forth helps the effect of internal thought.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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