Sins

Sins

A Poem by dread or dismay.

{{S.I.N.S}}

 

 

 

Watching it all fall done,

Right before my eyes,

You're painful grap poisoning,

The glass shatter,

Slicing you.

 

Couldn't save you from the start,

The silence choking me,

I've been trying to sheild you from the world,

Couldn't face the freedom that you took.

 

I know it was wrong to go on,

Chasing the hate away,

Silence.

 

You left me behind,

All thats left is torn.

So perfect before,

 

A cut waiting to heal,

Watching,

Two friends seperated.

 

Giving strength to face

The bloodshed,

Seeing the truth finally,

Showing them what I have seen.

 

Forgiving the sins.

 

 

 

© 2008 dread or dismay.


Author's Note

dread or dismay.
Yet another dedication to two friends.

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Chya. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


'Forgiven' - Within Temptation inspired this, correct?

I've used some of it's lines before too.
Omfg though it's almost identical to Insanity Pleader though...
Love ya' hun.


PS: Great right. :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Couldn't save you from the start,
The silence choking me,"
A wonderful line. All we have is silence because none of us can really talk.
Good job. im off to read more of your work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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