morning says

my feelings of every morning, when i get rise

a free breeze
a cool teasing breeze
teased my hair on my forehead
but fill my heart with bloom
bring me up with spirit
that i need but have little

morning sun is peeping
determined to grow up
atumn cloud take him
over and over again
but he will up in the high
it's the nature

how many sun i saw
to grow up with untitled streanth
but what i take from him?
only light nothing else
even i don't know today
how to rise up

Author's Note

do you like to share how do you feel in morning after rise up

Reviews

[Soul Fire]

good work,some spelling errors.Such as ''forehead'' in the 3rd line.Thank you very much for sharing this,good work.

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to see the sun and feel the breeze of a new day. I like your thoughts in the poem. Good to rise up to the sun and the wind. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

Nice :) It basically is what a lot of people feel when waking up in the morning just represented by your unique style of writing. It would all depend on how I slept, though, how I feel in the morning.

Nice write

[de_maruf]

thanks
i thing everyone has a different feeling in morning and it represent their status how their days going on