passion

nothing to say

passion…

 off this I feed

 a demented obsession with no safety

 sleeps and awakens

 hides and seeks

 unwanted but stirs

 for more

 wanting more

 how much more?

 within this curse my gift pours

 as if I’m fated only to define and reveal

 pen out every moment in detail that I feel

 smile; I write

 cry; I quote lines

 

passion…

 when it speaks

 emotions bare words to open and bleed

 words form phrases and deliciously meet

 baring my soul for everyone to see

 it’s maddening

 a never ending disease

 a force with no reckon

 an uncontrolled beckon

 flames in all I imagine

 unstoppable when tapped in

 there’s no measure

 lots of pressure

 vibes of pleasure

 a golden treasure

 that aches till I’m blind

 rhythm and rhymes

 carry over from night skies

 to sunrise

 this spirit flies

 floats on truth

 but drowns in lies

 

passion…

 causes me to see things inversely

 the blame of why I take to life differently

 i sense more than the normal being

 i thrive on and pay attention to my feeling

 it suffocates until I can’t breathe

 these burnings

 and yearnings

 they empty

 in the mix of heat

 of deleted scenes

 in all that I ink

 it drives my heart to pound out of beat

 

passion…

 can you hear it?

Author's Note

what do you think?

Reviews

[Geraldine]

Oh wow, this is my favorite of yours so far. Passion, indeed.

[de_maruf]

thanks Jing

[Geraldine]

you're welcome. :D

[Fabio_Cassilias]

i like this one it's very deep ..keep up your quite good mate..!

[de_maruf]

thanks for read

[Fabio_Cassilias]

your wlc

[Neville]

You ask me what I think.

I think with a little tweaking here and there
and a gentle twist, this could read exceptionally well. Don't get me wrong, this is no criticism, just a well intentioned suggestion. AGT's N

[de_maruf]

thanks
as you say

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

A really nice poem you have here. It gives me a great understanding of passion and I too can relate as I feed off passion to in everything I do.

I love how the poem flows so smoothly that you bring your readers into reading the next line until the end where you drop the bomb of your question 'passion can you hear it?'

Amazing and I will have this sitting in my library. (I like the picture XD )

[Coyote Poetry]

I like how you described passion. Each description adding to the feeling and desire of a meaningful word. Passion is needed is all things. Passion for life, love and freedom keep us alive and well. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAutho..]

Absolutely! I can hear it, feel it, see it, the image of the ink flowing upon the mind's vellum, throbbing in rhythm to the experience of your passion. It is... a treasure. Your anguish and frustration... so real in these lines, "...as if I’m fated only to define and reveal"

A most excellent poem!

[gombeggar]

i lot of energy in feeling here as it reads to me...good wording...hip ending lines